F.+Midterm+Essay

Michelle Singler 1/26/11 1-A

I demand you give me an A on this essay because I have put much time and effort into it. Giving me an A on this essay is an important task that has been bestowed upon you. You need to give me an A on this essay because there is no other essay that deserves it more than this one. I deserve an A on this essay because I am a duteous student, I put much effort in all my work, and getting an A will help improve my grade.

I am one of the few duteous students that you will find in this school because I am a student that respectful and obedient in school. I respect my teachers and honor everything they teach me. I would never raise my voice to them or say horrible things about them. Greeting my teachers with a “Hello” or “good morning” at the beginning of each class is something that I only do. I not only respect the teachers but also the school’s rules. I obey all honor code and I have never been in trouble. I even try to enforce school rules so school can be a better place for everyone. You will not find a student like me in any other schools.

I even put much effort in my work because I know that if you do not put effort your work you will get lower grade. This is why I start my projects early so that I can take my time and put effort into them. When the project is finally complete I can turn it in on time or even earlier. When I do not know the answer to something I ask or try to work it out on my own. I would never turn work in unless it satisfies my desires. I work to the best of my abilities and would never turn in work that has not been done neatly. I do all my work to the fullest so there is no reason to not give me an A.

An A is what I need right now to help improve my grades from a B to an A. Grades are most important things to me right now. The grades I get now will help me get into a better college and even help me find a better, high paying, job. I am just a few points off from an A and those few point can make a big difference. The few points that I receive from this essay will help increase my grade point average by a whole letter grade. Not giving me an A will ruin my chances of a future in a career that will benefit me.

You need to give me an A on this essay there is no reason for you not to give me an A. This is the best essay I have done and so much effort has been put into it. This is also the best essay you will ever read so just make this easy and give me an A. Not giving me an A would be an insult to the way you grade because not other paper deserves an A more than this one.